Tuesday, January 20, 2009

My student wrote: (Anggia 9c)

If WELCOME ENGLISH lovers want to achieve success:

You can see that one's success will be an inspiration to get "a step ahead to learn English and gain improvement" just like what this girl expresses...

WELCOME : my success
My name’s Anggia Ernes, but you can call me Anggi. I was born in Jakarta, December 22, 1993. My hobbies are reading books, listening to music, and singing. I’m good at playing piano. Some of my achievements are the third and the fifth runner up of story telling competitions. Together with my team, I’ve got the first prize of a band festival.
Here is my unforgettable experience when I joined the Story Telling Competition in St. Luois Senior High School.
A few months ago, I was told that there was an audition held in our English class (BIMP)for story telling competition in St. Luois Senior High School. In fact, I had no ideas at all about that story telling stuff. I was too shy to do funny/attractive movements. But, a miracle happened. I was selected to join that competition.Thanks God… (hmmm.....
"a step ahead to learn English and gain improvement"?)
A lot of things I’ve learnt from this competition--how to speak loudly and clearly, make various and expressive body movements, do my best, and attract the audience interest to my story. Of course I couldn’t do it alone. There were a lot of people who helped me--my parents, my friends, my teachers, especially Ms.Tyas.I couldn’t do that without her guidance and support. Thanks a lot…^^
I felt very…very…very nervous on the competition day, I felt that the time was crawling very slowly. Before did my performance, I said “All I’ll do, I’ll do it for You,God!!” I just tried to give my best, and when I did that… My fear disappeared…Hwffffff……… I did it…I did it… Thanks God… Thanks a lot…And… I passed it….Hohohohoho… So, the next round was waiting for me…
It was getting harder there. I felt a little depressed. Hhhh…That was not over… I thought that my rivals were better…better…and better than I was… I prayed for many times… But my fear wasn’t off like yesterday. I thought I would fail this round… Hix…hix.. I was not sure what I did on stage at that time, I just… passed it. Horrrrrayyyy!!!! Ohhh my God. (hmmm...another
" step ahead to learn English and gain improvement"?)
Then, the final round--the greatest round for me. You know why? I felt so relaxed to tell my story.Again, I just tried to give my best, and I did that for God.I just enjoyed doing my storytelling.And..I passed it!!!!Thanks God… Thanks for everything..
I hope, my story will not make you bored…Hohohohoho.. I just wanted to say thank you very much to all of you--My parents, all of my teachers, my friends (who lent me their clothes and supported me). But most of all,I say a great thanks to Him. I wouldn’t be able to do it without His great blessings.He is my everything. God,thanks for everything that You’ve done in my life… I hope this story would be an inspiration for you. I believe that all of you are “stars”. Do your best to praise the Lord!!!

Yeah...Lord will help us to get
"a step ahead to learn English and gain improvement". We will able to do it when we try to do it and believe that we are able to do it!!!!(phew???)

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